支招大作文|经典的“纵深”展开论证
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Nowadays, some older people choose to live in retirement communities with or old people rar than to live with ir adult children.
Is it a positive or negative development?
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Introduction
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Body
劣势一:
中心句(笼统说明段落大意):The distance may widen gap and loosen bond. 根据中心句展开(说明白具体情况):Although gap between parents and children is inevitable, being apart widens gap, 讲“为什么”,是论证的关键:because distance deprives m of chance to share thoughts and feelings and to have any mutual understanding, even making m strangers. The separation also stretches bond. As bond is stretched and becomes thin, it may eventually be broken. For example, it is not uncommon that elderly living in nursing很少有儿童来探访房屋。那些人一个人住,甚至有些人寂寞死。
劣势二:
中心句(9)与老年人一起生活可能会加速的衰老。 根据中心句展开(说明白具体情况):虽然变老是自然过程,这是无法逆转的,但是与同龄的人在一起会使过程更快。 讲“为什么”,是论证的关键: 很难有几个年长的人看生活或世界新鲜;取而代之的是,y更有可能同意每个人或对周围环境的过时观点,并为退休和无用而叹息,这归因于老年。缺乏火花或悲观情绪会使他们的心理年龄比生物学年龄大。
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