雅思作文-“看穿柱图”

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分享雅思考试小作文真题范文。毕竟成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。希望考生们能够认真地阅读这篇文章！

核心考核点：Compare & Contrast

“同时”：数据统计只统计了2012年一个时间点，而没有别的时间点。

“不同项”：不同年龄段、不同活动。

行文的结构上而言，可以没有conclusion；但是，行文的内容上而言，绝对不可以没有overview。

如果没有conclusion, 就把overview写在introduction里。

作文示范：

bar chart is an illustration of the percentages of Australian children and teenagers, divided by age, doing four activities. Overall, there was diversity among the three age groups, and within each group, the attendance varied from activity to activity. 【vary是雅思小作文必会单词，异常重要。】

通常遵循“General — Specifics原则”

During the same year, within the age range of 9 to 11, 70 percent of the Australians read, and a same proportion of Australians aged between 12 and 16 did the same thing. 措辞难度不在语法或者句型方面，而在说法 这一方面，写出来像在描述“事件”，而不是机械描述数据。 popularity of this activity was slightly lower in the 5-8 population. In terms of bicycling, Australians were active at obviously different levels, 措辞难度不在语法或者句型方面，而在说法这一方面，写出来像在描述“状态”，而不是机械描述数据。as the figures were in a rather wide range of 60 percent to 82 percent.