初中英语作文自由作文写作
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一、Write eight or more sentences about the season you like best.
内容要点:
1.四个季节中任选一个季节。
2.被选季节的特点(气候、时间、事物、活动等)。
3.人们在此季节所从事的活动。
4.作者自己喜爱的活动和感受。
参考范文
I like winter best. Though it is very cold, it is good for skating. I often go skating on Sundays with my father. When it , everything turns white. Trees and houses are covered with thick snow. How beautiful the world looks! My friends and I like to make snowmen. Sometimes we make snowballs and throw them at each other. That's a very interesting game. I like winter holiday very much because the Spring Festival is the happiest time of the year.
点评:
这是一篇描写季节的文章,文章难度一般。要求从自己的角度描写季节和感受季节。应注意以下几个问题:
(1)确定全文的时态。此文一般选用一般现在时。
(2)除了对季节的描述,一定要有自己的见解,这是得分的重要内容和关键所在。
作者用流畅的语言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表达清楚,结构紧密。
二、Write about what you are going todo after you leave school.
参考范文
When I finish school, I want to be a teacher. Though teachers are poorly paid and they have no power, teachers are kind, respectable and learned, like angels. They lead the pathway to succeed. It's quite sure that teachers are very important in modern world. We can't develop our country without knowledge. Teachers teach us knowledge. I like all of my teachers in my school. I would like to be an English teacher. It's very important for the students to learn English well today. I'll try my best to be an ideal teacher. My students can make our country better in the future.
点评:
这是一篇阐述观点的议论文,作者用简洁而流畅的语言表达了长大后想成为一名老师的愿望。论据充分,观点明确,并且字里行间渗透了对祖国的无比热爱之情和把祖国建设更加美好的决心。
三、请以My….为题写一篇短文。要求:有时间、地点、人物,字数不少于80个单词。
学生习作
My Mother’s Birthday | |
My mother is busy. She always busy works。 (1)她经常忘记生日。 上星期天是我母亲的生日。我邀请了几个朋友为她举行生日派对。 已经五点了。一切准备就绪。蜡烛在蛋糕上了。当我的母亲回到家中(2)时,她非常感到惊讶(3)。她问:“今天是哪个生日?”我们说:“祝您生日快乐!”她非常高兴。那时,莉莉给我妈妈一个不错的礼物,并说:“我希望你会喜欢。”“谢谢。我的母亲问。 “当然。”莉莉说。 “哦,这是一只玩具熊猫。 如何(4)一只漂亮的熊猫!”母亲说。 Meimei问我们,“您想唱歌吗?”(5 )“是的,我们会喜欢。”(6)我们说。我们所有人都和妈妈一起唱歌。 那天晚上,妈妈唱歌和跳舞像个小女孩。她比以前年轻 (7)岁。 | (1)总是把忙碌的工作改成总是忙于工作,因为busy是形容词作表语,“忙于做某事”应该用示。 (2)要把to去掉。home在此句中是副词,不需要加to。 (3)本句surprise在系动词之后,要把surprise改成 surprised。surprise具有名词、动词词性,其形容词有两个,他们分别是 surprised 和surprising,其中前者多用来指人,后者多用来指事。 (4)把how改成 what。在感叹句中how是用来修饰形容词或副词的,而what是用来修饰名词的。名词前可以有其他定语,单数可数名词前记住要加上 a或an。 (5)把singing改成to sing some songs, Would you like…后接动词时要加to。 (6)在love后面加上to。对 “Would you like …?”问句的肯定回答应为would like (love) 后加 to,因为这是口语中动词不定式的省略,也就是说to后面的动词短语省略了。 (7)把more改成much,因为more不能用来修饰比较级。能够用来修饰比较级的有:a little, a bit, much, rather,far和even等。 |
点评:
本文的小作者开篇就写出母亲的繁忙,为母亲忘了自己的生日和自己为她准备生日晚会做了铺垫,同时也教育了那些为了自己过生日讲究排场的同学,这也是本文的成功之处。另外小作者能够把学过的词汇、语法灵活地运用到本文中去,这也是值得我们学习的,不过还需要在个别词语用法上多下功夫。
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