支招小作文|烤鸭考“饼”怎么办？
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今天的主题是表格，提供一篇高分范文，供同学们参考！
本期小作文供稿：
章 跃
题源：剑桥真题集11的30页（六个饼）
高分范文及解析
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信息分组：根据用水目的分组：
✔ Agricultural Use: North America & Europe VS or four regions
✔ Industrial Use: North America & Europe VS or four regions
组1和组2呈现出相反关系，于是再合并。
Domestic Use: North America, South America, and Europe VS or three regions
然后，写作内容的顺序就根据信息分组来。
Introduction 略
Body：
先总写格局/趋势（不带数值）→In North America and Europe, wateris used mainly for manufacturing and or production← 注意词汇：题目中的 industrial use被替换,and this situationis just opposite of situation in or four regions, where water is used mainly for agricultural use. ← 把分组1和分组2都带进去写了。然后，写突出的具体数值→ Industrial productionconsumes as much as roughly half of North America’s and Europe’s respective total water usage, and usageby agricultural sector accounts for one-third or slightly more. In or four regions, the agricultural use of wateris between minimum of 71 percent (South America) and maximum of 88 percent (Central Asia), and industrial use of wateris divided, 大家的写作习惯是用定语从句介绍数值，其实可以用状语从句引出数值作为语法亮点 → as its percentageis below 10 in Africa and Central Asia and around 10 in South America and Souast Asia.
In terms of household use ← 注意词汇：题目中的domestic use被替换, South Americais particularly noteworthy, 用状语从句引出数值作为语法亮点→as almost one-fifthof total water used is for this purpose. This figureis higher, to different extents, than ones in or five regions.
注意全文中句子主语（方框斜体）的多样。
Conclusion 略
