07年英语一小作文:建议信绝对要这么写(第十篇)
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英语一 2007年
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Directions:
Write a letter to university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
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这又是一封建议信,可见考研命题人至少在这几年还是比较偏爱考查建议信的。考虑到绝大多数考生都去过图书馆,所以给图书馆提点建议还是比较容易的,相信很多考生都能想到自己在使用图书馆的过程中遇到的一些问题,诸如图书馆藏书太少、太旧,图书馆开放时间太短,自习位置不够,本科生权限不够等等。有了这些问题在提建议时就很有针对性了。
高分范文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a junior student and have frequented the library often during my time here. I would like to give some suggestions for the improvement of its service.
展开全文First, could you extend open hours to include evenings and holidays? Many students want to stay in the library day and night, after all. Second, quite a few books are outdated and yellowish, making them difficult to read or irrelevant. The collection should be updated better on a regular basis. Finally, the reading room should be enlarged to more students.
I really hope that these suggestions can help improve the library.
Yours,
Li Ming
参考译文
尊敬的先生/女士:
我是一名大三学生,在学校时经常会去图书馆。我想提一些关于改进图书馆服务的建议。
首先,你们可不可以把开放时间延长到晚上,同时也在假期开放?毕竟许多学生想日夜待在图书馆里。其次,不少书都过时了,也旧得发黄了,这些书要么读起来不方便,要么没什么意义。因此,馆内藏书最好能定期更新。最后,阅览室面积应该扩大,以容纳更多的学生。
我真心希望这些建议可以帮助改善图书馆。
此致
敬礼!
李明
好词好句
would like to give some suggestions for the improvement of its service:
我想提一些关于改进其服务的建议
frequent vt. 常到;常出入于
yellowish adj.发黄的;微黄的
irrelevant vt. 不重要的不切题的
accommodate vt.(有足够的空间)容纳
after all: 毕竟
on a regular basis: 定期地,经常地
考研英语写作 · 板砖句型(二)
1.There is a general assumption that 人们普遍认为
2.To make careful decision 认真做决定
3.It is quite obvious that 很明显
4.To draw our attention to 关注
5.Upcoming 即将来临的
6. Beyond one's comprehension 无法理解
7.To be deprived of 被剥夺
8.Few people could pay attention to… 关注……的人寥寥无几
9.We can often encounter a scene where 我们经常碰到……的现象
10.Commit a terrible blunder 犯下严重错误
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