支招小作文| 10月19日雅思小作文高分范文!
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10月19日雅思小作文真题
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The chart below shows the percentage of people using the Internet in four different places in 1998, 2000, 2002 and 2004.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bars illustrate, in percentage terms, 摆脱用percentage或相关百分比的概念做句子成分。→ the respective populations of Internet users in four places in the of 1998, 2000, 2002 and 2004.
分组时发现:the four witnessed highly similar patterns of using the Internet. 于是,这个情况和对应的陈述正好可以作为conclusion的内容。
In the four , 语法/句型关键得分手段:摆脱用percentage或相关百分比的概念做“主语”。→ homeswere where most people use the Internet, 语法/句型关键得分手段:摆脱用percentage或相关百分比的概念做“主语”。→and those peopleaccounted for roughly a half. The smallest percentage, ranging from 10 to 13 in the four , was in the category of using the Internet in the library.
Overall, the four witnessed highly similar patterns of using the Internet.