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The graph below shows changes in percentage of households owning the in the UK between 1975 and 2005.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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首先观察时间轴： 完全在过往，确定时态
然后，写作的关键技巧：分组（原则有二：根据线的位置；根据线的趋势）。此图根据线的趋势分组：one + more than two s VERSUS no + two s。
The lines illustrate the changing percentages of the ownership among the UK households over a 30-year period of 1975 to 2005. 接下来写图表的宏观（笼统的、趋势性的）情况：Overall, the period 时间为主语，后用“见证witnessed obvious changes in each of the four types of ownership.
Having one , the typical ownership, 通过“同位语”的语法方式，把信息压缩到一个句子里了 and having multiple s, the rare ownership, 如法炮制，通过“同位语”的语法方式，把信息压缩到一个句子里了 both had a steadyproportional growth. 于是读者就明白了写作者的分组Meanwhile, one- ownership, which increased from 40 percent to 55 percent, 通过“定语从句”的语法方式，把信息压缩到一个句子里了grew faster than 介绍了两条线之间的关系the other, whose increase was merely6 percent. 如法炮制，通过“定语从句”的语法方式，把信息压缩到一个句子里了
Both of the other two types of ownership, having no and having two s respectively, experienced an overall decrease. 先总写，再分写 Those households owning no had a decreased proportion from 30 percent to 20 percent, despite the slight increase between 1985 and 1998. At lower levels, 介绍了两条线之间的关系the proportion of two- owners kept sliding from roughly 25 percent to half of the original level.
The graph below shows the percentages of people in cities in four different countries between 1970 and 2030.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
首先观察时间轴：从 过往到将来，确定时态
然后，写作的关键技巧：分组（原则有二：根据 线的位置；根据 线的趋势）。此图根据线的位置分组：the US + India VERSUS the UK + South Korea。
The lines illustrate four countries’ proportions of urban populations since1970 and the projections for the future until2030. 接下来写图表的宏观（笼统的、趋势性的）情况：Overall, the increase since 1970, in all of the four countries, is likely to continue until 2030.
The US and India 地点为主语，后用“见证”have both seen/witnessed massivegrowth since 1970. ß 于是读者就明白了写作者的分组Although India started at a lower level 介绍了两条线之间的关系(40 percent), its increase has been faster than 介绍了两条线之间的关系that of the US, which started at 60 percent, and with its urban population accounting for 80 percent, 通过“独立主格结构”作状语的语法方式，陈述了数值India has almost caught up with the US. 如法炮制，通过“定语从句”的语法方式，把信息压缩到一个句子里了 In the future decade, the two countries’ urban populations are likely to both reach around 85 percent.
There has been overall growth in the UK and South Korea, 通过“定语从句”的语法方式，把信息压缩到一个句子里了 which曾经非常相似通过状语从句的语法方式，陈述数值，因为它们都增加了20到30。两国随后开始遵循不同的趋势并拥有不同的数字。 先总写，再分写在韩国，自从进一步增长以来，该数字已缓慢上升至40以上的水平，而英国的数字已逐渐接近40％。正如预测所表明的那样，未来十年中两国都将保持稳定。
