支招小作文|一写就凉凉的流程图该咋写？
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分享雅思考试小作文真题范文。每一篇范文都经由专业团队反复校对，最终外教审查定稿。成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。
本期小作文供稿：
章 跃
今天的主题依旧是“流程图”。《剑14》里的流程图，是流程图的“集大成者”。
这个流程图同时具有两个种类的流程图的特点：既是制作/制造工序（发电）又有循环（水流是在发电厂里循环的）。
《剑14》小作文：流程图
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diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
于是，接下来的sample essay就遵循day and night and again 的 cycle 来写。
高分范文及解析
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diagram is an illustration of how a hydroelectrical power plant works to generateelectricity.
开始注意：制作/制造工序类型的流程图的词汇核心在于（但不限于）动词。
dam obstructsthe influxof water from the river and createsa reservoirat a great height. At the bottom of the dam is an entry point that is open during the day and through which water flowsinto the tunnel, which leads to the reversible turbines, whichspins. spinning produces power that operates the electricity generator. 「独立的重要步骤不拿定语从句写，而是单独写一个句子/或者是状语从句。」At this point, electricity is produced. Electricity is then transmittedvia the power lines to the national grid and to households, manufacturersand businesses.
In addition, water goes into a low-level reservoir, and during the night, water flows inverselythrough the way it flows down to the intake point, which is closed at night, and back to the high-level reservoir. As a new day starts, water is let down again.
总结制作/制造工序类型的流程图的核心在于：描述简单或者复杂程度。
Overall, electricity production with hydraulic poweris not a complexprocedure, with simp没有 设备 。
