支招小作文（五）|地图题真的有那么难吗？
2020-08-20 10:49:21 32
本期小作文供稿：
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今天的主题是“地图题”。地图题到底难不难？
难在图，赢在写法。
以《剑桥14》上的地图为例，推荐（仅是推荐）“visitor视角”写法。
《剑14》小作文：地图题
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two maps, put together, displaythe change of Grange Park.
In 1920, visitors 【←引入visitor视角就好写了】wouldsee a fountain in the park’s center asthey entered from either Arnold Avenue or Eldon Street. y would see a musical stage west of the fountain and rose gardens on the north and south sides of the stage, and seats were available in the vicinity ofeach garden. 【← 不把每个细节特征拆成独立的句子，就可以控制篇幅→】In the east, visitors wouldsee another rose garden, bythe Arnold Avenue entrance, a pond for aquaticplants in the northwestern corner, and a glasshouse bythe Eldon Street entrance with seatsnearby.
* 注意：“visitor视角”写法并不意味着大家抛弃描述方位。
【在历史情况的基础上，写出关键区别】At present, the fountain is replacedwith a square-shaped rose garden surroundedby seats, and the musical stage is developed into an amphitheater for concerts. Visitors 【← 引入visitor视角就好写了】entering from Arnold Avenue will see a café and a children’s playground in the corner instead of the rose garden and the pond. 【← 不把每个细节特征拆成独立的句子，就可以控制篇幅→】Visitors entering from the Eldon Street entrance will see a water feature on their right. It is also notable that there is an underground car park near the water feature.
* 当然，是不是有更简洁高效的介绍方法？有的。但是，对于地图这种“难”题，我们先规矩着来。主要了解和在练习中尝试“visitor视角”写法
【地图的综述很好写，就写变化程度的大小】Clearly, the park is enormouslydifferent from it was in the year of 1920.
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