支招小作文|万一去年没考够(地图)
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章 跃
Teacher’s NOTE:
* We may describe locations of buildings in map(s), we may alternatively create a visitor who is reader’s avatar and navigates.
* With visitor, it will be a clear route, which enables our reader to better understand map.
* When re are two maps, one illustrating past and or present/ earlier past/ future, we make comparisons and find similarities and differences between two times.
* Turn t o Test 4 of Volume 14 of Cambridge Past Papers, and following sample essay is written by rules stated above.
教师示范
Introduction
Overall, change of park is rar obvious, although general layout remains.
Body
At present, north entrance on Arnold Avenue and south entrance on El唐街(Don Street)仍保留在1920年的位置,汽车可以停在东南角的地下停车场。
一个使用南入口的访客将立即在公园中心找到一个玫瑰花园,该花园可以代替喷泉。花园在外面环绕着座位。同时,保留了入口处的尼尔座位或玫瑰园,入口右侧的温室被位于水角的水景代替。
在玫瑰园向西转,访客将在音乐舞台上找到一个两栖动物,并看到位于西北角的肛门玫瑰园。座位的拆除使花园独自在角落。如果位访客从玫瑰园向东走,则位访客将看到一个咖啡厅和儿童游乐区,作为第三个玫瑰园和水生植物池塘的替代品,并且不再有座位。
结论
如果对于图表的总述已经在介绍处写清楚,那么就可以没有结论。